Hey guys, here is an original poem called Look Not Far. This poem was a real challenge to me. Firstly, I wanted there to be an 8 6 8 6 rhythm, which after some dictionary work and grammar bending I was able to do. However I also wanted there to be a ABAB rhyme scheme. Now, the first stanza worked, however after that, the next two couplets just didnt look like the rhyme was going to work, without me saying less than what I wanted to say. So I just gave up, and got back to the rhyme in the last couple of stanzas, although yes I cheated and used the same words for the rhyme. But I think that this poem is more about the words and less about the rhyme scheme. Obviously this poem is about a musician wanting to write a song, but not finding any inspiration. Enjoy
Where shall I find my insp’ration
To write my own own song,
So that I need no citation;
To me it will belong
Shall I up to the moon look up
Emitting light to me
Its light, reflected from the sun
To me no beauty holds
Shall I look up to the sunset
A fiery casting glow
This light, refracted by the sky
To me, no beauty holds
From where shall I then write my song
So that it will be true
Cuz all the things around me now
Seem stolen or untrue
So look not far, so look no not now
To things so far from you.
But rather look inside you now.
And search what’s inside you
For everything that comes from you
Will always be so true
So look inside your soul right now
And you’ll find feelings true
sasha. If I could play guitar in a car with tsar, I would give up that skill just to read this poem again.
ReplyDeleteIncredible job my friend.
good job sasha. Nice and very moving. However, this poem was not nearly to the quality of meaning as Alistair's comment. good job both of you.
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